Learning narrative.

our class has been rewriting a book that has all ready been Rewritten and this is what I did.

We are learning to write a narrative using adjectives.

One sunny afternoon mother horse took her ponies to the apple tree to look for some delicious apples.

Mother horse saw a big hungry tiger and mother horse galloped away from her ponies.

 the mother horse started limping, her leg looked broken.

The big hungry tiger saw the mother horse but did not see the ponies.

The big hungry tiger ran after the mother horse.

Mother horse's leg was not broken so she booted the tiger and galloped away.

Happy to be back with her ponies.

Blog profile.

 this is my blog profile .

i have written about what i like and my goal this year.

Digital pepeha.

I have learnt how to use the audio and the remove background.

I liked using the audio and the remove background.

Joanne rowling.

 I have learnt that Joanne rowling has written the harry potter books. 

and she has written 49 books.

And I enjoyed searching up about Joanne rowling.

Kia kaha

Personal Goals.

Personal Goals

Using speech Punctuation.

WALT use speech marks in our writing.
WALT uses different types of punctuation.

 Success Criteria I will have 4 stories. I will use speech marks in our punctuation writing.
 1.They must be a brother and sister and the girl come back from somewhere like Australia to see her nan. “Hey my sister, it's been too long since I've seen you.”
 2. ¨I love to play piano. I wish I could play. It makes me dance¨ said Abbey.
3. Tim and Abbey are having a picnic nick. They had burgers and drinks. ¨It is delicious,said Tim.
4. ¨Why did you eat all the food?¨said Abbey. ¨I was hungry´too, said Abbey. ¨We should buy more food, said Tim.