Tuesday 16 March 2021

Learning narrative.

our class has been rewriting a book that has all ready been Rewritten and this is what I did.

We are learning to write a narrative using adjectives.


One sunny afternoon mother horse took her ponies to the apple tree to look for some delicious apples.

Mother horse saw a big hungry tiger and mother horse galloped away from her ponies.

 the mother horse started limping, her leg looked broken.

The big hungry tiger saw the mother horse but did not see the ponies.

The big hungry tiger ran after the mother horse.

Mother horse's leg was not broken so she booted the tiger and galloped away.

Happy to be back with her ponies.


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