I am learning to read with expression.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

19/10/2017.

We should play sport every day.

I think we should play sport every day.

Firstly why I think we should play sport every day so we can learn some skills like dribbling

Secondly I think we should play sport every day because

 It helps us to get fit.

Lastly I think we should play sport every day because we can brith oxygen

That's why I think we should play sport every day.  

Basic Facts.

I am learning to get more accurate with my Basic Facts.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

17/10/2017

On my birthday.

On Sunday me and Cyprus and VJ were at my house for my birthday.

First we were playing the xbox. It was fun. I was winning the game.

After the xbox we played handball. We played it outside. I used a bouncy ball. It was bouncy as. I won that game too. I was too good at bouncing the ball.

After that we had a cake. It was a chocolate cake with sprinkles on the top. It was yum.  

Then I opened my presents up. My presents were cool. It was great opening up my presents.

After opening my presents we were playing the xbox again.

Finally Cyprus and VJ went back home. I had an awesome birthday.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

19/10/2017.

We should play sport every day.

I think we should play sport every day.

Firstly why I think we should play sport every day so we can learn some skills like dribbling

Secondly I think we should play sport every day because

 It helps us to get fit.

Lastly I think we should play sport every day because we can brith oxygen

That's why I think we should play sport every day.     

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

18/10/2017.

We should do homework every night

I think we should do homework every night.  

Firstly I think we should do homework  every night because it helps us with our learning.  

Secondly I think that  we should do homework every night because we can learn better.

Lastly I think that we should do homework because we can get smarter.

That's why I think we should do homework every night.    

Recount Writing-Opononi.

I have been learning to write my ideas.

15/08/17

Opononi

On Friday afternoon I went  to Opononi with my Dad to go fishing. We went to the rocks. I saw some fish. They were swimming in the water. I said to Dad, “Look at the fish swimming in the water.” Dad said, “Let’s catch those fish.’’

I caught the fish.