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17/10/2017

On my birthday.

On Sunday me and Cyprus and VJ were at my house for my birthday.

First we were playing the xbox. It was fun. I was winning the game.

After the xbox we played handball. We played it outside. I used a bouncy ball. It was bouncy as. I won that game too. I was too good at bouncing the ball.

After that we had a cake. It was a chocolate cake with sprinkles on the top. It was yum.  

Then I opened my presents up. My presents were cool. It was great opening up my presents.

After opening my presents we were playing the xbox again.

Finally Cyprus and VJ went back home. I had an awesome birthday.