Recount Writing-At the beach

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25th Pipiri

At the beach.

On Sunday me and my mum and my little brother went to the beach.

When we got there the water looked cold

so me and my little brother went on the sand and we built a sandcastle.

It was a big one. Then it started to rain so

we went to the car and when we got in the car

our feet were sandy and the sand got into the car. 

We got hungry and then we went to get some fish and chips.

It got cold but it stopped raining so we went back
to the beach and our sandcastle was broken.
The waves had pushed the sand over.

I felt disappointed.

So we built another sandcastle.

It was a small one but we built it bigger. It was a good sandcastle. 

Next me and my little brother looked at the water. It still looked cold.

After that we went in the car and we saw two fishing rods.

One for me and one for my little brother. 

We went on the wharf and my mum was watching us fish. 

I caught a big fish then my brother was waiting

and he caught a small fish and he dropped it in the water.

He cried because he was sad. 

Then my big brother came with my aunty and he bought  his fishing rod.

He almost caught a fish but it dropped back down.

Next he caught another one. It was bigger than my one.

He was excited. He was jumping up and down.

He was yelling, “Look I caught a fish.” 

After that we took our fish home and cooked them for our dinner.

They tasted yum.

I had an amazing day.