Persuasive Writing-Brushing Teeth.

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Brushing Teeth 
Teeth are very important to help us be healthy.
I think we should brush our teeth everyday.
 Firstly I think we should brush our teeth everyday so we don’t get stink breath and if you go by someone they won’t come next to you because your breath stinks.
 Secondly I think we should brush our teeth everyday so our teeth
can be strong and healthy. Then you brush the bacteria away.
 Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth everyday because it can protect our teeth.
When you brush your teeth it gets the food out
but sometimes you don't brush your teeth properly so we brush our teeth
in the morning so your teeth are clean.
 So in conclusion the good thing is you should brush your teeth everyday.
 That's why we should brush our teeth everyday.