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At the Park
On a sunny Sunday me and my dad went to Coundown in
Kaikohe to get shopping. When I went to Coundown
I saw William. I said, “What are you doing?”
He said, “I am doing shopping with my mum.
” I got some milk and some bread. When
I finished me and my dad went to the park in Kaikohe
to play. We were playing shark. It was cool playing
shark on the park. Then my dad said, “We are going.”
Kaikohe to get shopping. When I went to Coundown
I saw William. I said, “What are you doing?”
He said, “I am doing shopping with my mum.
” I got some milk and some bread. When
I finished me and my dad went to the park in Kaikohe
to play. We were playing shark. It was cool playing
shark on the park. Then my dad said, “We are going.”
When we got home me and my dad were playing kicks
with the ball. I enjoyed my day.
with the ball. I enjoyed my day.
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