Recount Writing-At the beach.

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07.08.18
On a sunny Saturday afternoon me and my dad and brother went to Opononi for a swim. 
 In Opononi we went for a swim at the beach. 
First I touched the water. It was cold. 
“Brrrr. Brrrr.” I said. I felt cold but I still wanted to have a swim. I jumped into the water. I splashed my brother. He was cold. We had a long swim. It was cool fun. 
After that my dad was going fishing on the wharf. 
My dad saw some fish. He said, “Let's go and catch those fish.” Dad felt a fish pulling the fishing rod. Dad pulled the fishing rod back. He caught the fish. He was happy and excited. He had a big smile on his face and he was laughing.